I like my hometown because it is a calm place, its a place to have fun and its has school.My hometown I like it has lot of tree and grass and it has lot of thing that your like and are school, has lot of new thing .Panmure you have shop all around the place .
Heyo Ellernora!
ReplyDeleteI hope to hear more about your hometown sometime soon. You blurb was alright, but I do think that you should give more description to tell your readers loads of information about Panmure.
Keep up the great work! - Florence
Hello Ellenora, my name is Billy and I am from the Summer Learning Journey programme.
ReplyDeleteThank you for completing another activity where you describe your hometown. I love reading about the tall trees and green grass that surrounds your home.
What sort of shops does Panmure have?
What is one thing that you wish Panmure had?
Thanks, Billy.
Heyo Ellenora!
ReplyDeleteYour hometown sounds amazing. I agree with you because I live with you. Haha. You have done an amazing and outstanding job. Well done for completing this activity. Out of all the shops you have been to, which was your favourite?
Blog you later!
Florence
Greetings Ellenora,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this task. I am glad to see you getting out there and posting more and more summer learning journey activities. I did this activity too. It was sure interesting to do. Did you enjoy completing this task? Why? I love the description about your hometown. Your hometown sure sounds amazing to be in and safe to be in as always. I love to have shops around my hometown, because it will be closer than going to the supermarket right?
NICE:)
Talofa lava Ellenora,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blurb you have written. I also like how you have decided to finish all these activities. Next time you should add a simple picture and attbruite it as well. Was this activity hard. Make sure you should make a big blurb.
Was it easy for you to finish off?
Joshua